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It has been long since I wrote something but to make up for the lost days to my funs I think is about time I give you a true story about my friend and I. I changed her name in the story, just in case

Driven to the edge

She was prey. Captured and bound , the woman knew she no longer had any choice in her fate anymore .Her life was forfeit , and the outcome of the events to follow were all in the hands of her captors now ……
The men eyed her hungrily, their eyes shining a demonic lust behind the cotton balaclavas, men possessed by a primal need to injure, to hurt, to take something that wasn’t theirs to take, and bend it
To their will, 12 in all, all of muscular build, from 6 ft to 6.5, all naked, with hard and battle tested cocks standing to the Attention of their masters,
She couldn’t remember how she had gotten here, as she took stock of her surrounds, she failed to notice any distinguishing signs that defined where she was, it was dark, it was musky smelling but
Not offensive to the nose , but a familiar smell all the same , then there was the cologne , A strong masculine scent , full of danger and malice , it was a smell that she would never ever forget , a smell that if ever again recognized , would violate her senses , make her knees tremble and her bladder lose its
Strength.
She was snapped out of her reverie by the sound of shackles rattled, as one man climbed upon the
Strange contraption she was lewdly strapped to, a sub frame of gleaming, well looked after steel
And padded leather held her naked body in place, with leather straps running over her belly and shoulders tying her torso to the frame, her legs, held tightly in stirrups were strapped at the ankle
Knee and upper thigh, again with leather straps .she felt the device spinning gently and realized with some disgust that the device was in fact a large rotisserie she could be rotated a full 360 degrees to whatever man wanted her service next. Her neck and head were turned to one side, with a
Strap keeping her head to the cushion, it was here she noticed the men were beginning their preparations,
They came up to her all silent, professionals in their horrific field of expertise, some holding extremely
Strange looking objects in their hand, She let out a whimper and one of the men grinned in earnest.
The grinning man went out of her vision, but she could sense his presence near her exposed cunt
She heard the rattling of a can, then heard the hiss and instant cold as he sprayed her groin with
Ounces of shaving cream , he rubbed the cream into every crevice and inside her ass cheeks and over her puckered asshole , he then pulled out a fresh razor and methodically shaved every inch of her pubic and anal regions till he was sure he had cut every hair , he then washed the remaining cream off of her
Vagina , and then plucked the stray hairs with tweezers , every time making her gasp in a short spasm of pain , she felt the man move away , but was instantly replaced with another , this one rubbing
In something sticky onto her asshole, then she let out a groan as a tube was pushed inside her rectum.
She felt what seemed like liters of warm water pushed up inside her anus, and she shuddered as she felt the water doing its job, she sobbed as the man removed the tube and held a bucket underneath her
Waiting for the eventual flow that she was desperately trying to hold inside, finally she couldn’t hold it
In any longer, and crying with shame and humiliation, she emptied her bowels in front of the 12
Demonic men
The final humiliation was also the most terrifying for her , a man came to her head , his hard cock swinging right in front of her lips , the man crouched and looked at her , then proceeded to fit a strap around her neck , with a silver ring in the middle , confusion addled her mind until she realized with
Horror what the ring was for. The man held her nose tight, and when she gasped for air, he quickly
Stuffed the ring behind teeth, forcing her jaw wide open, ready to be abused and defiled as they saw fit
The last man to come forth was the least threatening of all , he carried a very large bucket , the contents within sloshing gently at the brim , he went to the end of the contraption , and opened the hollow tube with the funnel end and began to pour liter after liter of the fluid into the bowels of the machine , he then hooked up clear plastic lines to small nipples near the leather seat , and taped a tube to the top of her vunerable cunt , just near her pubic mound , and the other to the inside of her ass cheek , then standing up , he nodded at the others , who quickly gathered round the chair , and began to massage their thickening cocks ………………………………………….
A man came towards her face, rubbing his hardening cock while staring at her slutty body glistening
Under the giant spot light, he started slapping his cock on her cheek bone, taunting her, terrifying her,
He let out a small grunt , then grabbed a fistful of her hair , angled his cock to her opened mouth , and teased the head of his cock in and out of her lips , her eyes watered as the thick head of his cock raped her unwilling mouth , trying to move her head away , she realized the futility , her entire body was frozen solid , no muscle in her entire body could move , she could only take and take and take , never saying no , never able to resist , the man tired of the taunting , grabbed her head in both hands and brutally stuffed his entire cock down her throat , ripping the sides of her lips and making her eyes bulge out of her skull , he began pumping her throat , his fat cock sluicing in and out of her , dragging the deep spit from her throat lining , covering her lower cheek and chin in slimy spit , he kept grunting
And thrusting and pushing his cock deeper and deeper, till she was sure she would surely choke,
Only for him to pull it out, and ram it back in again, over and over, till his cock was glistening with her spit, he finally slid his cock out of her throat, and it hit the leather with a wet slapping noise, and then he spun the chair around so he was at her groin, she felt her relief short lived as another man stepped up and began abusing her throat. The curiosities about the tubes near her groin were answered, when the man pushed a button, a humming noise erupted from the machine, and slippery fluid ran over her anus and groin SHE WAS BEING LUBED AUTOMATICALLY?!?! , the man aimed his fat cock at her asshole, and grabbed her hips and drove his cock right up her tight puckered asshole, behind the cock ring and the cock buried in her throat, she screamed the most guttural and primal scream, as the burning and ripping sensations churned in her ass, and the man kept pushing his cock in and out of her torn asshole
She began to cry , and kept screaming as the men laughed at her pain , over and over he pounded into her anus , the head of his cock pushing open her rectal muscles and searing her torn rectal wall , as the precum started to leak out of the eye of his cock the salty residue began to sting her asshole , the man
Let out an explosive roar, and emptied his balls deep inside her plunging in and out rapidly as he pumped her asshole full of rapist grade cum, he pulled out with a grunt and his cum emptied out of her ass, leaving a trail in her ass crack, the next man quickly grabbed her and spun her round to him, this one taking a fancy to her well lubed cunt, he slid himself into the hilt, and began to rape her intently
He bent over her and took one of her nipples into his mouth, and started to savage it, chew it and grind his teeth into it, while his hips ground his cock in and out of her cunthole. the man fucking her face started to buck harder and faster, before pulling his cock out and Cumming all over her face…aiming for her eyes, she felt the semen start to burn and sting horribly, he laughed as he jacked the final spurts of cum into her throat, again another man took his place, jamming his swollen cock into her mouth,
And jacking in and out of her throat ………………….
One by one, the men took their turns inside her abused and swollen holes, fucking her
Raping her, filling her orifices with fistfuls of cum, treating the woman like a piece of
Slutty meat,
The last 3 men not to have cum, took her body at the same time, making her grunt like a whore
One man started to plunder her asshole, while another raped her cunt, and the 3rd fucked her face
she was lost in a sea of pain, and suffering, the men were breaking her body and crushing her
Mind , they abused and fucked her for what seemed hours , all of her orifices fully plugged with unsheathed , fat cocks , ramming inside her , until finally almost at the same time , they all came
In unison, emptying themselves into her slutholes, and leaving her full of cum, until it started to empty out of her…dripping onto the cold concrete floor …..
She was in a daze, floating in and out of consciousness, she didn’t register the sound of
Wheels on concrete coming towards her, didn’t feel the machine connecting to the base of the chair,
She awoke, and saw a man plugging in some evil contraption that was aimed directly at her cunt…
Her poor swollen, oozing, sore and used vagina was aching, …..
The frozen penetration of her asshole and vagina snapped her out of her daze , the fucking machine in front of her , loaded with dual dildos , seemingly frozen solid , were pounding in and out of her ,
She gasped and squirmed as the ice rubbed against her abused holes, dripping into her, freezing her,
A bucket appeared, and ice water was thrown over her body, sending spasms down her entire body, as she shook and bellowed and rattled the entire chair, every nerve on fire.
The men gathered round, to watch the slut get fucked stupid, her own body betraying her, she began to grunt like a slut, and her pussy swelled with blood, before she gasped and squirted all over the machine and its toys, her anal passage thoroughly used up, the ring hanging loose around the toy, as it slid in and out of her asshole,
she passed out again,
She awoke to pain, suffering and utter despair…..she heard the lube machine whine and felt like what
Seemed liters of lubricant pour onto her cunt and ass, the biggest of the men, came up to her, and without any warning or preview, jammed his fist inside her anus, tearing at muscle, straining her ring
Making her cry out in sheer, unadulterated agony, she cried, and bellowed, and begged behind her
Gag, to no avail, the man kept stuffing his hand in and out of her asshole, with each thrust threatening to prolapse her abused bowels. Just as she was about to pass out, another man stepped forward
And stuffed a fat cock down her throat, duct taped it to her cheek, leaving her throat full of plastic, hard cock. and finally a 3rd man stepped forward , to the other side of the first , and punched his fist deep inside her swollen cunt , and she finally lost every sense…she shuddered , she bucked , she went to the edge of insanity and over it , her entire being had been raped , used and defiled , she could only feel pain and terror and sheer inhuman cruelty , at the hands of the masked deviants . they pounded her cunt and anus repeatedly , over and over , violating her body , bruising her cervix and intestines , till the pure pain took hold again and her mind collapsed upon itself…….
She awoke in pitch black ….. Nothing ….no noise …no vision….there was nothing, she could see no light
Hear no sound, deprived of the basest of senses, she began to feel her sanity slip…….
A hatch opened…..right on top of her…a grill…she realized her head was in a box ….
The men stood in a full circle around her, all aiming their well used and throbbing cocks at her
Then they unloaded. Emptying bladders full of cum soaked urine, onto her exposed and upturned face
Hitting her in the eyes , running over her open mouth , she gasped for air , as the piss ran down her throat , her disgust at drinking piss , put aside by the pure need not to drown , the box filled quickly , and soon her hair was floating in a sea of piss , the clear fluid the final sufferance of her ordeal ,
The lid shut again , and darkness ensued , she heard the men packing things , she tried to talk , but her throat betrayed her , she heard the noise of a door opening , footsteps , then the shutting of the very same door , and finally the sound of the lock turning ………
Silence….
Not a sound, or voice,
Darkness, no light or vision
Alone, Deserted
She was alone in her insanity,
No Rescue
Nothing at all…………..
Written By James M. 25.11.2009

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Broken Birds, Part 17, A New Beginning

Part 17
A New Beginning
The birth seemed almost anti-climactic. Rafaela endured eight hours of pain to hold her daughter to her breast. Following the birth, Jennifer took the opportunity to repair some of the vaginal damage from the long ago rapes. Rafaela would be as tight as when she first met Michael.
Mother, daughter, father and eight aunts cared for the little girl. Michael understood and allowed his harem to care for his child. By unanimous vote, they named her Michaela.
The birth, though, triggered pain in many of his women. Rachel, Beth and Shoshana would never know the pain and magic of having a child in their birth canal.
The day following the birth, Michael and Beth crossed the main living room, smiling at Rafaela, feet up, snoring gently in an overstuffed recliner with a pillow under her butt.
Maria was staring out the large windows overlooking the sea. Her face and body language said she was miserable. They went to her.
“What’s up, Honey?” Michael asked as he bent to kiss her cheek.
“I know I have to heal, but it hurts so much,” she wailed softly and started to cry.
Beth sat next to her, pulling her into a hug, “You’re almost through it, Honey. Just a little longer and you’ll see the clouds part. Sometimes it just takes a trigger to get you the last few steps.”
At the word “trigger”, her head snapped up. She looked directly into Michael’s eyes, pleading.
Michael and his harem had discussed this the night before. Nita had responded to the months of intense therapy, but Maria had hit a plateau and could not seem to get passed it. In her mind it was simple. Make love to Michael and she would be cured, just like Rafaela. Jennifer had even put her on birth control, though more to regulate her cycle than afford protection.
Maria could not understand why they would not share him. They loved her. She was sure of that.
She certainly wasn’t a virgin! Like a sore tooth, she had explored the seeming contradiction every day for the past several weeks.
Knowing he might regret it, he said, “We’ll talk about it tonight at dinner.”
She jumped into his arms, tugging to get him to lean forward so she could reach his lips. Her kiss was filled with animal lust and need.
When they broke the kiss, he saw the sadness in Beth’s eyes.
Maria whispered, “I’ll be a good slut for you, Michael.” Inside he winced.
“Remember, we’ll talk at dinner,” he said to her back as she streaked to the bedroom she shared with Nita.
“I don’t think she heard you, Dad,” Beth said sadly.
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As Beth stepped into the shower, Michael followed. He spun her to face him, startling her. He took her face in his hands and kissed her, trying to send his love through his lips and tongue. One hand on her back to keep her pressed against his hardening cock, one hand on the back of her head, keeping their lips locked together. After what seemed an eternity, their lips parted.
He stared into her eyes, “I loved you before you were even born and every minute since. I loved you enough to risk losing you. I love you more than life. Don’t ever doubt that, Honey,” he said fiercely.
They washed in silence and toweled off. Michael picked her up and carried her to bed.
They kissed with a ferocity born of pain. She desperately wanted to be joined to him, not through his shaft, but through his skin. She wanted to be a part of him. She wanted him to be hers alone. She needed to feel that special bond again.
He understood.
He levered himself atop her, his cock trapped against her belly.
“Daddy, I need you inside me. NOW!”
She wiggled to free his member, urgently grabbed his shaft. She rubbed it up her slit, parting her inner lips and pulled him into her steaming depths.
He thrust hard and deep. By the third stroke she was fully impaled.
Her hands dug into his ass as she thrust upward. They soon found their rhythm. To the outside, it would seem brutal fucking, but it was really an act of desperation on a primal level. Both said goodbye to an old, normal life and sought to embrace a new one. Having been asked to share one more time, both felt the loss of time together.
Knowing each other’s body well, they came together.
He eventually rolled off her and held her close.
“What just happened?” she asked in wonder.
“I don’t really know. I just feel like I let go of something.”
Beth nodded.
Maria fidgeted, waiting for dinner. She had spent the afternoon politicking the harem to agree. Finally they were called to the table.
It would have been cruel to force the small girl to endure further uncertainty. Two presents sat in front of her place at the table. One was square, the other rectangular and flat.
Maria’s hands flew to her mouth and she ran to Michael, jumping into his arms, placing her soft, supple lips on his. When the kiss broke, she whispered, “I’ll be a good cumbucket for you.” Inside, Michael winced again.
She happily hugged each woman in turn, finally hugging Nita who had a strange look on her face.
Maria tore the paper from the box. She opened it to see her commitment ring. As she was about to put it on her left ring finger, Beth spoke, ”Honey, you wear it on our right hand until you and Michael make love. Then you put it on your left hand.”
She opened the second gift. “This is for you as a member of our adult family, it is a symbol of love,” Rafaela explained. She insisted at being at dinner, despite the pain.
“When will I get my ring and necklace?” Nita asked quietly.
Alice visibly winced. This was just what she feared would happen.
Michael sat down and patted his lap. She sat obediently.
He reached down and lifted her chin, looking straight into her eyes.
“Honey, you will choose that time. You know I love you, but as a father, as someone to guide and protect you. If you offer yourself to me, I couldn’t say no. But then I will love you as a woman. Think hard because the moment a woman first offers her love never comes again.”
“I know you lost your physical virginity to a brutal rape. So did most of the people in this room. What some men don’t understand is that your emotional virginity is much, much more important and valuable. Miguel tried to force Maria to offer herself to him. When she refused, he tried to destroy her.”
“Yet tonight, she’s offered herself to me. Her once in a lifetime gift.”
“This summer we’ll start to travel and learn our new world and our new neighbors. In this land, you and Maria are exotic and, in any world, you and Maria are very beautiful. Young men will seek you out. As a father, I would want you to wait until after the summer to choose to offer yourself.”
As he finished, he looked up, directly into Maria’s eyes. Then she looked down at her ring. She turned to Alice, her eyes pleading. Alice walked around the table to whisper something to her and led her aside.
Nita went with them.
Jennifer rose and walked to him. She kissed him, hard on his lips, “I don’t think I have ever seen a better father.”
“So just where are we going this summer?” Beth asked.
Michael pointed to Jennifer. “Ask our tour guide. She can make a list and Tim will make it happen. I’d really like to do all the local things and some diving on the Great Barrier Reef.”
Rafaela rose and kissed Michael with love. She slept in a side room with the baby. Jennifer joined her, concerned with the amount of energy Rafaela had expended so soon after giving birth.
Alice returned as they prepared for bed. Everyone seemed a bit subdued having seen Maria go from uncapped joy to uncertainty.
“You trying to put me out of business?” Alice said to Michael, a tired smile on her face, “months and months of therapy and you get her to open up in ten minutes. She wants to wait, at least till after summer. She wants to keep her ring and necklace, but she’s afraid to tell you.”
“Go to her and Nita. Take Beth. They really identify with her. They saw her statement on the Internet.”
They knocked softly. Nita opened the door. Maria sat on her bed, head down. Michael went to her as Beth asked Nita if she was OK. Nita nodded and pushed her gently toward Maria.
Michael and Beth hugged her from both sides.
“I want to be fixed,“ a sniffle, “I want to feel clean and new. Michael, I need you.”
“I know, Honey,” he hesitated, “I love you Chika. But what I said to Nita goes for you too. I could never refuse you. You know that. But as your father, it is my job to protect you, even if it’s from yourself.”
Maria started to sob which escalated into a wail.
He pulled her to his chest, stroking her cheek. Across the room, Beth held Nita.
Finally the tears ran dry and they got the girls in bed.
Exhausted, they returned to their room, collecting Alice who slept in a recliner.
Michael slept late. He awoke with Shoshana beside him. She smiled radiantly.
“Good morning love,” he said smiling.
“Good morning my husband,” she replied.
“Where is everyone?”
“It’s past noon. They’re in the pool. The girls woke everyone early. They want to learn to swim, so they can dive and surf this summer. They also want to work out with you, Beth and Jennifer. They want killer bodies. According to Jennifer, the guys are awesome. Fortunately, I have the most awesome man.” It was the truth from her perspective.
He slid out of bed and reached his hand to her, pulling her out of bed and into his arms.
He grabbed his trunks. She slipped into a one piece slinky purple bathing suit that accentuated her lovely body, yet could not hide her nipples.
‘Dear God,’ Michael thought, ‘the boys will go ape over her.’
Michael and Shoshana were in time to see the end of the lesson.
Beth and Jennifer had Maria and Nita in the shallow end with Alice nearby to help, teaching them the basics. Lynne swam laps slowly. Rafaela sat in a lounge, a pillow beneath her, nursing their child. Rachael swam languidly in a wall lane. She had not been diving in more than twenty years!
Food arrived as the girls climbed out of the pool.
Maria came to him and kissed him on the forehead, “Thank you, Daddy.”
She walked off swinging her hips provocatively, emphasizing what he had missed. Lynne swatted her butt, “Don’t be a prick tease. Don’t tease until you’re ready to please.”
“But I am ready to please!” Giggling, she deftly avoided a second swat.
They came to think of the summer as a new beginning for them all. They attacked their explorations with a relentless enthusiasm. Tim only objected to public water parks and amusement parks. Reluctantly they agreed to postpone those adventures. They dove the Great Barrier Reef, rode the sky rail to and from Kuranda station, explored the Sydney zoo and aquarium; they took a water taxi to eat at Doyle’s in Watson’s Bay they climbed Uluru.
Nearer home, they learned to surf with hard-bodied lifeguards as instructors. Oddly, Nita led the flirting. They tanned on the beach and pool deck, Maria avoiding the sun, as she would become too dark.
If it wasn’t a perfect summer, it was close.
Maria turned 17 and Nita 16. They had separate parties for each at the guesthouse in the compound under the watchful eyes of Tim’s men. None of the local guests ventured to the main house.
Michael and his harem gave Maria a diamond necklace and Nita a beautiful hand crafted belly ring with a native deity outlined in platinum.
The amount of attention poured into the girls helped them heal. Alice monitored their progress. She was pleased, but apprehensive. While Maria was genuinely recovering, she continued to focus on Michael.
One night, near the end of summer, she took Michael aside. Outside, rain pounded against the ocean facing windows.
“I need to talk with you about Maria,” she said sadly. “You gave me five months to get through to her. No go. She’s much happier than she was, but she has it in her head, that she needs you. I think she may genuinely love you, woman to man. She’s fooled around with some of the boys and she thinks they’re immature and just want in her pants. She knows you love her. And you postponed having her so she could be sure.”
Michael nodded, “What do you think we should do?”
“When she comes to you, if she says she wants to make love, I think you should agree. I’ll talk to the others, but I think we’ll want to make it a very special day for her. By the way, she’s never had a man go down on her.” She smiled sheepishly, “and I know how good you are with that devil of a tongue.”
A week later, Maria came to him, a determined look on her face.
“Michael. I want this ring on my other hand. I’ve waited and learned more about men and my feelings. I’m sure now. I want to give my once in a lifetime gift to you. I want more. I want to give my life to you.”
“Then I humbly accept, my Love,” he said softly with the hint of a smile, “I think the girls want to help, so tomorrow will be yours. Tomorrow night we’ll have an early dinner… and we’ll make love for the first time.”
It took a moment for his words to penetrate. She’d expected an argument. She leapt into his arms, kissing his eyes, forehead and cheeks.
Breaking the kiss, she looked at him and tenderly placed her lips on his. It was a promise.
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The girls did everything possible to make the night perfect. A light dinner as Beth led Michael to the bedroom, kissing him gently, then firmly pushing him through the door. Soft music played while shadows thrown by candles danced across the room. A bottle of champagne sat chilling on the dresser with two flutes.
Rafaela and Alice brought Maria. She wore a long, white, gossamer thin negligee with spaghetti straps. It set off her raven hair and dark skin. She looked breathtaking, a sensual little angel.
He stood to receive her. Rafaela and Alice retreated and closed the door quietly.
His arms went around her waist; hers went around his neck. He looked down, into two pools of love and adoration.
Her hands crisscrossed her shoulders. She moved the straps off her shoulders and let the negligee fall to the ground. He opened his robe and shrugged. It fell to the ground, displaying a very hard cock.
“Please don’t tease me Michael. I’ve waited so long for this.”
He picked her up and laid her gently on the bed, sliding beside her, pulling her to his body.
He kissed down her throat, paying special attention to the sensitive spot just behind her ear, then took her earlobe between his teeth and gently pulled. His hand cupped and then caressed her breast feeling the firm softness. Then to her hard, demanding nipples. He sucked and caressed one nipple while his fingers pulled and twisted her other.
Instinctively she knew this lovemaking was for her alone. She abandoned herself to her man, moaning loudly.
Instead of descending, he brought his lips to hers and they kissed a first kiss. Her lips trembled against his.
His lips began descending again, retracing their earlier pattern.
His tongue caressed her flat belly while his hands kneaded her breasts and dark protruding nipples. Maria moaned constantly while her hands gripped the sheets by her side.
As he got to the shaved top of her sex, Michael shifted positions, lifting her leg so he could lie between them. He didn’t tease her. His tongue traced the outline of her inner lips, inhaling her fragrance of fresh woman. She was far wetter than he expected. Maria’s eyes were squeezed shut so nothing would distract her from the exquisite pleasure Michael’s tongue was creating.
He licked her starfish. She went rigid. She squealed her pleasure. He parted her nether lips with the tip of his tongue, tracing the wet lips until he reached her clit. His fingers gently pulled her lips apart, exposing her small pink clit.
He knew she was close, writhing in ecstasy. Without buildup, he sucked her clit and began whipping it with his tongue.
A primal unintelligible scream erupted from her mouth. Her legs locked around his head, her hands holding him in place. His tongue began to graze the tiny button. She began to buck in a familiar sexual rhythm. His tongue matched it. She bolted upright. She was really screaming now.
He could feel her pussy flutter. He refused to release her clit, bathing it in new sensations, sending shockwaves through the little girl.
Then her sensory overload circuit breaker popped and she collapsed, mumbling, “no mas.”
He crawled up to hold her, his cock painfully hard, but all he wanted was to hold this little girl.
In the main living room, Rafaela turned to Alice and Lynne. “I thought we had the walls soundproofed,” Lynne said giggling
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They sipped champagne, waiting for her sensitivity to subside, both smiling in wonder.
She turned on her side and levered her head to look into his eyes, “I never dreamed…No one ever did anything like that to me.” Then it hit her, “I really was a virgin!”
Giggling and squeezing his cock, she said, “I think it’s time to make me a woman.”
He lay back indicating she should be on top. She was small and it had been a long time. He wanted to be sure he didn’t hurt her.
She understood. Facing him, she swung her leg over his body and positioned herself, sliding the head of his cock to open her inner lips. She thrust down, her urgency surprising Michael. His hands cupped her hips, “Slowly Chika. We have all night and if you hurt yourself…”
“I need you inside me, my Love.”
He used his hands to teach her to rotate her hips, letting her tunnel stretch. By the time he felt his cock against her cervix, she was near another climax. He pushed her legs parallel to his, grabbed her waist and flipped them so he was now on top.
He began a series of long, slow strokes, feeling her internal muscles gripping and releasing his cock. She moaned loudly, her eyes squeezed shut to drink in all the pleasure she could.
She demanded faster, harder with her hips. He began to plunge hard into her. On this third stroke, her legs slammed over his, her nails biting into his shoulder. Another. He could feel her holding her breath. Again. Her eyes snapped open and she let out a scream. He kept pounding her small pussy, seeing pure lust in her eyes. She thrashed beneath him, a wild animal in need of total satisfaction.
She screamed incoherently, pulling him deeper with desperate urgency. She reached her third, volcanic orgasm just as Michael spewed his seed into her wanton pussy. He collapsed onto her, unable to support his weight any longer.
He rolled off and pulled her into his arms.
Reaching down to caress his now flaccid cock, she said, “I’m REALLY glad they didn’t cut this off.”
After a time, Michael snuck into the living room for another bottle of champagne. His women all has ear phones over their ears and knowing smiles on their faces.
Lynne looked up, “Gotcha,” at Michael’s sheepish look.
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Photos of Laura

I had been seeing Laura off and on for a couple years, we were fuck buddies at best, and at our worst would go weeks not talking. We had been on again for a while when Laura called and invited herself over that night. Laura was exceptionally hot, long blonde hair, blue eyes, tight body, year round tan, nice B cup breasts, and a shaved pussy that I loved to eat.
Usually when Laura came over after work she would bring a sexy outfit with her and dress up for me, occasionally we took pictures of her in various states of dress and undress that we would save and look at later. That evening was no exception. When I got home Laura was already there, she’d let herself in. She was sitting on my dining room table, bare legs dangling over the side. She was wearing a pair of my boxers and one of my dress shirts, unbuttoned.
I could see her tanned stomach through the opening of the shirt, and a hint of her breasts at the edges of the shirt, she was smiling at me playfully from across the room. As I crossed the room to her she slid her hand down the front of the boxers she was wearing, rubbed herself, pulled her hand out and stuck two of her fingers in her mouth while moaning at me. I got to her and pressed up against her, she had scooted up to the edge of the table, and was pressing back against me. The shirt opened a bit and I ran my hands up to her tits.
Laura kissed me, shoved her tongue into my mouth, and started taking my shirt off. I backed up a bit and dropped to my knees, which let her completely remove my shirt. Quickly I reached up and pulled my boxers off of her, sliding them down her legs, over her ankles, and off her feet. Her bare, shaved, tanned pussy was right in front of me and I wasted no time in putting my tongue to it. She was dripping wet, her cunt lips were glistening with her juices, and I stuck my tongue right onto her clit. Laura jumped and then started wiggling her ass around on the table, she was wiggling her pussy against my mouth and tongue.
In no time at all she came, her moans growing louder and louder until she was practically screaming. I knew all the neighbors could hear us, and I knew that Laura did too, but I think the thought of her letting everyone know how hard she was cumming turned her on more. Wanting to make her cum harder I reached up with my hands and started fingering pussy her while I sucked her clit into my mouth. I rolled her clit between my tongue and lips as I shoved two fingers inside her causing her to buck her hips against me. Her knees where on my shoulders, her hands on the table behind her, and she was holding herself up pressing her pussy against my face.
She started cumming again, and grabbed a handful of my hair with one hand and held my face against her pussy. Her moans were just as loud as the first time she came, but she was wiggling more on the table. As she started coming down, her breath coming back to her, she looked down at me and said, “Please fuck me. Fuck me now”.
I stood up and Laura kissed me, sucking her own pussy juices off my tongue, while I started taking my pants off. Laura’s hands moved frantically trying to help me get my pants and boxers off, she was out of control at this point, all she wanted was a hard fucking. My cock sprang free from my boxers and Laura hungrily grabbed it, slowly jerking her hand up and down the length of my shaft, still kissing me.
As I stepped out of the boxers Laura repositioned herself on the edge of the table, her wet pussy spread and waiting. She guided my cock straight to her waiting cunt, the heat her body was generating was intense. “Give me your cock”, Laura said, “shove your huge cock in me”.
She started kissing me again as I entered her. Both of her hands were on the table behind her, and I put my hands on her hips. Her pussy was so wet that I slid in with no resistance, and when the whole length of my cock was inside her she let out a loud moan. Immediately she started rocking her hips back and forth and I started thrusting to meet her. My cock pounded in and out of her pussy with each thrust, the sound of our bodies slamming together indicating that the whole length of my cock was inside her. Each movement brought my cock out of her pussy until just the tip was inside of her and then immediately she would slam back against me taking all of my cock.
“Yes! Fuck me! FUCK… FUCK…”, Laura was moaning in time with our fucking. I knew she was doing it just so the neighbors would hear us, not that we weren’t both already moaning loud enough for that. Our pace increased, our fucking becoming more fevered, both of us getting turned on by the noises the other was making and knowing that other people could hear us. She leaned back and brought her hips up off the table, using her hands as leverage, the position left her tits completely exposed and I stared at them enjoying watching them bounce in front of me.
It didn’t take long after that for me to start cumming. The feel of her tight pussy gripping my cock, the sight of her tits lewdly bouncing, and her chants of, “fuck me… fuck me…”, had pushed me over the edge. Laura pushed her body hard against mine, taking my cock deep in her pussy, as I started pumping her full of my cum. She had been having one long orgasm, but she started cumming harder as I emptied my cock into her waiting cunt. We stayed like that for a minute kissing, my cock going slowly limp inside of her pussy, she was still on the edge of the table.
After that Laura and I took a shower to clean up and get rid of the sweat. In the shower she rubbed her body against mine, the soap and water making her slick, her tits pressing into my chest as she kissed me. I was starting to get worked up again watching her run her hands over her naked body and Laura smiled at my growing cock.
She kneeled down in front of me, spreading her legs, and sucked my half limp cock into her mouth. Laura moved one hand to her pussy and started fingering herself and she put her other hand on my balls. “I love it while you finger yourself and suck my cock”, I said looking down at her. My cock was disappearing in and out of her mouth, she was moaning softly, and her hand was working furiously over her pussy. Watching her suck my cock and finger herself was completely erotic and I was getting hard again.
When my cock was completely hard Laura stood up and turned her back toward me. “Put your cock in me”, she said looking over her shoulder at me. She put her hands on the shower wall and stuck her ass out toward me. I moved up behind her, my hard cock sticking out in front of me, and aimed right toward her pussy. She pushed back against me and I pushed my hard cock into her, sliding into her pussy easily. We spent a few minutes fucking in the shower, her ass slapping back against me as I pistioned my cock in and out of her tight cunt.
Laura came once more in the shower, but I couldn’t cum again so soon so we got out of the shower and headed to my bedroom. I turned on the lights in the bedroom and got out my camera, meanwhile Laura started getting dressed. First she slipped on a black thong, followed by a pair of sheer black stockings. I started taking some pictures while she was getting dressed and Laura was flirting to the camera the whole time, bending over to make sure I got a shot of her from behind, squeezing her tits toward me.
The final piece of clothing was a purple corset which she laced up slowly to tease me. “Where do you want me?”, she asked.
“Bend over the bed and stick your ass toward me”, I replied. Laura bent over the bed, her heels making her stocking covered legs look great, and she wiggled her ass at me. I took some pictures of her thong covered pussy, her stockings and heels, as she looked back at the camera over her shoulder. “Hook two fingers in your thong and pull it aside, let me see your pussy”, I told her.
She reached one hand beneath her, sliding it between her legs and into her thong. I kept taking pictures as she dipped two fingers into her pussy, her thong still in place. Laura never took her eyes off my still stiff cock as she worked her fingers in and out of her pussy, moaning softly as she did. Then she pushed the thong aside, revealing her wet cunt for the camera. Her pussy lips were glistening she was so wet, and I could see her clit poking out pink and puffy. I got close for some pictures as she worked her fingers back inside herself.
Laura turned slightly and arched her back, using her free hand to pull one of her tits free from the corset. I got a shot of her massaging her free tit, rubbing the nipple between her fingers, while her other hand was still buried between her legs. She continued to rub her pussy, the thong pushed aside, while I moved around to get some more pictures. “Climb on the bed and let me see you play with your pussy”, I told her.
I moved to the end of the bed and kept taking pictures as she got on her knees, ass and pussy toward me. Laura slid her thong down her stocking covered legs and then returned her hand to her dripping cunt. I managed to get a few more pictures of her fingers disappearing into her pussy, her tits out of the corset and hanging beneath her, before I couldn’t take it anymore. Stepping up to the edge of the bed I moved my cock to her waiting hole and slid inside of her. She started moaning again, loudly, as I fucked her from behind. I ran one hand across her ass, teasing her asshole lightly with my thumb, and she exploded in orgasm.
She came so hard she nearly pushed me back off the bed, the force of her pushing against me cause my thumb to slip inside her ass. This only drove her more wild with lust, she was completely out of control at this point, bucking against my hard cock and exploring hand. It went like this for a few minutes before I once again pumped a load of cum into her tight pussy. Laura orgasmed hard as I did, practically screaming as she came, our thrashing causing the bed to shake, before we both collapsed on the bed completely spent.

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The Slime Pit at The O Club

Sally becomes a newbie blue band girl at The O Club. Her hidden yearnings are brought to the surface when three of her friends convince her to go with them to experience The Slime Pit at a local place called The O Club.

Broken Birds, Part 35 Healing

Part 35
Healing
Alice and Michael sat on the lounge pool deck, watching the sunrise over the ocean. They’d arranged the meeting the previous evening, not wanting to be disturbed.
Alice had been treating Kelly for almost ten days and needed help.
“She’s in really bad shape, Michael. She’s in a very dark place knowing her own stupidity caused her sterility. Hate is still coiled inside her. She lets it out in her sport, but it’s still there. She told me you said to imagine something she wanted desperately as a reward for the pain?”
Michael nodded.
“She wanted a child. She said I could tell you.”
“Shit!”
“There’s more, but I can’t talk about it.”
“What I wanted to talk about was moving forward. She can’t train for six weeks. That was her outlet, her relief valve. We’ve got to figure a way to let her hate and pain out quickly.”
Michael watched the sparkling ocean, remembering his own recoveries. He’d been a terrible patient.
“She used to draw when she was a kid. She was pretty good. We’ve got room. What about setting up a studio for the girls. I know Beth loves to paint.” It was something he’d been considering for a while.
“Then encourage her,” Alice said thinking, “Challenge her. Tell her about the walls. Make her feel she is part of us.”
Alice loved this man and his intuitive intelligence. If Kelly could express herself on paper, it would provide her with an outlet and Alice with a continuing barometer of her recovery.
Kelly and Jennifer returned from Brisbane three days later. While the surgery had gone well, the violence of the penetrations had caused significant collateral damage. Kelly would be unable to exercise for at least eight weeks, probably longer. Then she might need additional surgery. She would have to stay in the infirmary for at least a week.
Michael and Alice took a thick sketchbook and drawing pencils to her. She looked small and fragile, pain written on her face. Jennifer was adjusting her pain meds. “Hi Honey. Brought you something.”
Kelly’s eyes lit a bit. She loved to draw, but after the rape, she’d concentrated on her sport. Like Alice, Kelly worried about the forced inactivity, but for an entirely different reason. Her body was accustomed to an athlete’s diet. Kelly loved to eat and feared the weight gain. When she’d been younger, she could lose herself in drawing, sometimes not eating for days.
“You can put that memory of yours to work … and as you’ve seen, we’ve got a lot of empty walls.”
“I don’t know, Uncle Mike, it’s been a long time.” The meds started to work and the lines of pain on her face eased.
He said nothing. She looked into his eyes. She saw disappointment.
“I’ll do my best,” hoping to see the look in Michael’s eyes ease.
“Honey, your father died because people only did their best. Doing your best is an excuse for failure. Don’t ever accept failure with an explanation or excuse. It’s still failure. If you set your mind to do something, do it.”
She looked hurt, like a scolded child. She started to cry. He put a comforting hand on her shoulder.
Alice squeezed his hand, a signal to keep going.
“I’m sorry you can’t carry a child. It happened because you couldn’t face your rape. Face it now. Beat it. No excuses. Just do it. You’ve still got an ovary, so there’s still a chance.”
“It’s time to claw your way out of all that hate and pain inside you. I’ve seen your fights. There’s no surrender in you. You’re just like Beth. You’ve seen the pictures, but that doesn’t tell it all. They drove a broom handle through her uterus. They tortured her. They pulled her teeth because they feared she’d bite them. She was bleeding to death and crawled out a second story window so I would know she never gave up.”
“Why do you think they used the taser on you? They were afraid of you. Now your body’s healing. Let us help your soul and heart. Any time you want to give up, remember Beth crawling out of that window, bleeding to death. She beat her attackers. Now it’s your turn to beat yours. They wanted to ruin you. Don’t let them win.”
Michael turned and walked off, shaking with empathic pain.
Alice stayed, her admiration for Michael reaching new heights. He’d gone off the script when he saw she was resisting. His extemporaneous idea to switch to her fighting spirit to defeat those who wanted to ruin her was pure genius.
Over the next month, Kelly attacked her mental and emotional recuperation with a ferocity Alice had never seen. Pain that had terrorized her was ignored and conquered. Kelly never wavered. Alice helped Kelly turn the pain inside into a victory over her attackers.
Now they had to conquer her terror of physical intimacy.
Jan had not forgotten her promise to Michael. She and Shoshana polled the harem and arranged for another night with Michael. None of the girls would ever say “no” to Shoshana.
Michael was surprised when he opened the bedroom door. He’d expected Rafaela.
“Surprise!” Jan called out, jumping into his arms.
With Alice’s words still in his mind, Michael began to focus on Jan. He kissed her fervently. She broke the kiss with joy in her eyes.
“I want to make love to a man for the first time in my life,” Jan said, still in his arms, “and give you my last physical virginity.”
Shoshana pushed him back into the bedroom, a determined look on her face. “Tonight we’re going to make mad, passionate love to our man, so you better take a pill and a 5 hour energy drink! You’re going to need it, husband.”
Michael chuckled and followed instructions.
When he came out of the bathroom, they were naked on the bed in a loving 69 with Jan on top. Jan saw him and disengaged from Shoshana, motioning him to the bed. He shed his robe and hopped on, taking Jan into his arms.
They kissed warmly, then with passion, then frantic need. Jan had not been with a man for many months. She desperately needed him inside her. Michael understood, but did not want to hurt the teen.
He laid on his back, his cock hard and demanding. Jan took it into her mouth and slurped the head, lubricating it freely. She swung a leg over him, facing his feet. Shoshana took his shaft and parted Jan’s inner lips. She was dripping with need. Shoshana fitted his shaft into her lover. As Jan slowly impaled herself, Shoshana claimed Michael’s lips.
Though she had fucked many men, Jan had a teen’s tightness. Michael felt huge. Jan concentrated on relaxing. Michael’s hands taught her hips how to swing to minimize the stretching pain, all the while kissing Shoshana.
Shoshana broke the kiss and scooted down to help Jan.
Finally, her ass rested on his pelvis. She swung her legs out and fell backward. Michael caught her. He swept her blonde mane so he had free access to the sensitive area behind her right ear.
He felt her go rigid as Shoshana’s incredible tongue began to explore her stretched inner lips.
She moaned her pleasure. She gasped as Shoshana began to caress her clit.
Jan urgently pulled Shoshana’s lips to her pussy. Michael’s hands kneaded her breasts and teased her nipples.
“You are loved, Jan,” Michael whispered, “Feel that love now and forever.”
He pinched both nipples. Jan screamed in ecstasy. She bolted into a sitting position, driving Michael’s cock deep in her sheath. The head of the cock rubbed along her “G” spot sending incredible pleasure through her nerve endings. Shoshana seemed insatiable, sucking at Jan’s clit and pussy lips.
Jan’s neurons kept misfiring until it became painful. She pushed Shoshana away and rolled off Michael, his cock popping out of her pussy.
She rolled over onto her back. When conscious thought returned, she found herself cradled between Michael and Shosh.
“God, you’re big! But I still want it in my ass. Just be gentle or I’ll be walking bowlegged for a month!” she said giggling.
He looked over Jan into Shoshana’s eyes. “Time for me to be inside you.”
She leapt on him, joy written on her face. She faced Michael, her dark eyes smoldering as she impaled herself. Jan scooted between Michael’s legs behind her. Jan began caressing Shoshana’s shoulders and back with her fingertips.
Shoshana moaned, closed her eyes for a moment swaying to unheard music. Michael twisted and pinched her long nipples.
Her breathing became ragged. Jan lubed a finger with Shoshana’s juice and gently inserted it in Shoshana’s ass.
Shoshana screamed her pleasure. Jan whispered something to her, kissing the sensitive place behind her ear. She kept climaxing.
Michael’s thumbs played with her clit, capturing the little nerve hub, torturing it gently.
Shoshana shrieked her climax. She’d never felt like this. She was the center of Michael and Jan’s love. For the first time in her life, Shoshana was at peace and totally happy.
The girls rested for a while, basting in the pleasure and love. Michael swallowed his frustration, knowing his girls needed time to explore the wonder of this night.
They brought him champagne, the joy in their eyes infinite. Two giving souls had found a mate that brought them peace and love.
Finally, Jan looked at Michael. “I need you to take my last virginity and say goodbye to Janet.” Michael realized she was terrified of the pain to come.
He almost said “no”, but Shoshana’s stern eyes stopped him. This was something that needed to happen.
Shoshana whispered to Jan. Jan moved to Michael’s cock and began to lovingly caress it with her practiced tongue.
Shoshana started to lick Jan’s puckered hole, caressing and penetrating it.
Lube and warming gel followed. Shoshana caressed her lover until she was sure the pain would be minor.
She signaled Michael and helped Jan to a “doggie” position. Michael knelt behind. Shoshana took control.
First she aimed his cock at Jan’s dripping pussy. Michael pushed forward, re-lubricating
his shaft. After three strokes, he pulled back. Shoshana repositioned his cock. He pushed forward carefully.
Shoshana flipped onto her back, her face now inches from Jan’s. Jan felt her breath. She opened eyes that had been closed in fear. Their lips touched. Need flowed through them.
Shoshana felt Jan’s pain as Michael’s shaft slowly impaled her. She knew Michael would never be brutal. His shaft was just unusually large.
Jan kissed Shoshana urgently. Shoshana chuckled inside. Obviously Michael was fully inside her lover’s ass.
Michael felt Jan’s incredibly tight sheath and the fiery heat of her bowels.
Suddenly music filled the room. Shoshana was behind him, her body teaching his to move to the rhythm. As he moved, Shoshana grabbed Jan’s hips and the three of them moved as one.
Jan’s breathing became ragged. Shoshana reached around and found Jan’s clit. She began caressing the bundle of nerves.
Jan began to shriek her joy.
Shoshana frigged Jan’s clit mercilessly.
Michael inserted a finger in Jan’s pussy.
Jan screamed her climax. And she kept screaming as Shoshana and Michael continued.
Michael was too close. As Jan’s vaginal muscles spasmed, Michael announce, “I’m CUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMINNNNNNNNNNNNNG!”
Jan fell forward. Shoshana moved quickly to bring Michael’s shaft into her mouth, taking several ropes of cum.
After his cock stopped spasming, Shoshana looked up to ensure Michael was watching. Jan lay on her back, understood what she wanted. Shoshana’s mouth hovered above Jan’s. Shoshana opened her mouth and shared Michael’s seed.
Michael thought it was one of the most sensual things he’d ever seen.
Jan and Shoshana kissed deeply.
Michael laid on his back, his cock responding to the sensual kiss between Shoshana and Jan.
Shoshana and Jan were exhausted.
Michael spooned Shoshana who spooned Jan. Shoshana could feel Michael’s cock start to rise. “Why did I tell you to take a pill?” she wailed happily.
Later that night she found the answer to her and Jan’s delight.
Kelly was eating breakfast when Michael, Shoshana and Jan came to the table. She adored Michael. His hard-nosed approach to her recovery had helped her more than anyone knew.
She was a professional athlete, accustomed to challenges. Only Michael had understood how to reach her. She also knew from Beth how Michael had forced her to confront her fear of physical intimacy. Kelly realized that Michael was also her answer. Typically, Kelly went to Beth.
“Honey, I want Michael to be with me, to teach me to make love, to make me whole.”
Alice warned Beth that this could happen.
“Kelly, we love you. We really do.”
“But?”
“Two things. First, we make love. For us, that’s a lifetime commitment to him and to each other. Is that what you want? Second, do you want to give your once in a lifetime virginity to Michael?”
Kelly looked confused.
“I’m far from a virgin,” Kelly said.
“Really? You’ve given your body, heart and soul to a man?” Beth said, “That’s what making love is all about. I didn’t know you’d done that.”
Kelly’s head snapped up as though she’d been hit.
“Honey, Michael is a very special man. You’re a very special woman. If you want to dedicate your life to him, I’ll happily ask the harem to agree. If you want to use him to prove that you’re healed, I don’t think that’s a good idea. He’ll do it, but it will tear him apart later. He’ll feel he stole something very precious from you.”
“Think about it, Honey.”
Kelly did think about it. She thought about going to Michael, but decided to go to Alice.
Alice confirmed what Beth had said, including Alice’s willingness to support Kelly as a harem mate.
They talked about it for hours. Kelly thought about her burgeoning marshal arts business with the closed life she would lead in the compound. She found her answer by accident.
Kelly wrestled with the decision on the lounge pool deck. She heard a child’s cry for help. Something in the tone caused her to react. She hit the water before her conscious mind engaged, finding a sinking child and then holding a terrified Vika high. She gave Vika to her nanny who had left for a moment to go to the toilet.
When she climbed from the pool, she had her answer.
She went to Beth first. “I’m all in. One condition. If I find a surrogate, Michael and I can try for a baby.”
Beth hugged her daughter’s savior with fervent passion. “Deal.”
Michael had never faced the united support from his harem quite like this. It was a bit comical. Everyone was in violent agreement. They all wanted Kelly as a mate.
Beth begged for the chance to tell Kelly, her daughter’s life still on her mind.
Beth approached Kelly, “How do you want this to happen?”
Kelly’s eyes sang. “I want Michael for myself the first time.” No doubt; no hesitation. She finally had her answer.
The festive atmosphere in the compound was palatable. Kelly’s heart sang. Ten years on she would make love for the first time and to a real man.
There was a ferocity to Kelly that both attracted and frightened people. Michael and Beth embraced it. They shared the same ferocity.
The next night, the harem helped her to prepare with its newest member, Jan experiencing the moment for the first time.
The girls explained Michael’s preferences. Kelly barely heard them, having nearly seventeen years of knowing Michael. She was frantic to feel him inside her.
Beth and Alice saw it. They waived off the others and took Kelly to Michael.
He was just out of the shower when they knocked on the door.
He welcomed Kelly into his arms, chuckling. “You’re a little early, Honey.”
She looked into his eyes defiantly, “Michael, I love you. I always have. I can’t wait to give myself to you for the first time. I want you to make love to me and really make me a woman.” No bull dung. No hesitation.
“Then let’s get into bed.”
Kelly had never made love, so Michael started slow, kissing her passionately. Kelly would have none of it. She needed to believe, to feel physical love.
Michael chuckled inside, but he knew what Kelly wanted.
He stripped her bathrobe and his own. Kelly had a feral light in her eyes. He pulled her to him.
“I want you to give me an hour,” Michael said softly, “an hour to set the pace, to teach you to savor. Then we can go wild.”
Jennifer had told Michael that the damage had been extensive. They’d removed a good deal of scar tissue, so Kelly’s sheath was very tight. Coupled with Michael’s weapon and desperate need, rough sex could rip her badly. They’d suggested taking Kelly to the sex gym, but she only wanted Michael inside her. Jennifer had gone to Michael to explain the problem.
Her eyes screamed in frustration, but she nodded, her trust in Michael absolute.

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Nasty Boys by Millie Dynamite

Flash story about two boys fool around on a random chat site and meet a woman that convinces the boys to do nasty things together. Very different than my usual story. No murder, rape, or violence. Read and enjoy leave a comment if you like.